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 "Ring Ring!!!" Your phone rang. You rose your head from your pillow only to find, yep that's right. Your ex boyfriend. You push your phone to the floor. You shove your face back into your pillow. You just couldn't take it. It has been 2 days since your breakup with America.

You raise your head from your pillow and well, it probably wasn't even a pillow anymore cause it was soaked with your tears. He finally stopped calling you so you go pick up your phone only to find that he has called you '27 times'. And with every call came a voicemail, so you clearly did the only thing you could think of. You deleted them of course.

You get up and walk to the bathroom sink. You turn on the cold water and rinse your face to try and make the redness go away along with the puffiness of your eyes cause you didn't want anyone to know you we're crying. Just when you finished, you heard a knock on the door. So you got a towel, dried up your face and ran to the door.

You opened it to find your best friend 'England'. "Ello ______. I haven't seen you in a while so I came to visit. Is that alright with you?" He said. He finally finished. He looked up at you and noticed you were crying. "What's wrong?" He said as he grabbed your arm and lead you to the couch. "Nothing." You said. "Please tell me...." He said. "Fine" you started off. "If you must know. It has been 2 days since my breakup with America......" You said bluntly. ".................." A long silence fell around the room. "But how? You two were perfect for each other. Did he breakup with you?" England said staring staring at you dumbfounded. "No......... I broke up with him........" You said trying not to look at him. "May I ask why?" He said. "Well, I caught him cheating on me......." You said looking down at your lap as if you were about to cry. "............................. Come on, lets go." England said pulling your arm while walking quickly out the door.

England brought you to his car and drove to America's house. He told you to wait in the car as he ran to the door and tried to open it but couldn't so he kicked the door with all his might, and just his luck. The door opened. He ran quickly around the house calling America's name so he could find him. England found America playing video games in his room.

"America, you bloody git!!!!!" England started. "She's crying her eyes out, crying until her hearts content and your here playing video games!!!?!????!?!?!?!? It's been 2 days since the break up and you act like its nothing!!!!! Your acting like it never happened!!!!!" The angry Brit said to the American. "Well she broke u-"

"No! Not another word!!!!" England cut America off. "She cried over you, stressed over you, waited on you, missed you, tried for you, fought for you, changed for you, begged for you, dropped everything for you, tried to express herself to you, tried to get you to understand how much she loved you, and was in love with you-"

"And you know what?" You walked in the room as you cut the Brit off. "I'm done. Done trying. Done waiting on your texts, done missing you, trying for you, fighting for you, begging for you, and changing for you. I'm letting you go, for real this time. So when you wonder where I am or who I'm with, remember you left behind everything and I TRIED fixing it. But I'm done trying. Because I've only proved to myself you no longer deserve my effort.-"

"She changed for the better and it's a shame your missing out on such a wonderful person, sucks to be you." England cut you off but that didn't stop you. "To be honest with you america, I never thought that I would love you when we first met ...... But I was wrong. I never thought our first kiss would be so great ...... But I was wrong. I never thought that our late night chats would be so great ...... But I was wrong. I never thought that you would hurt me ............ But I was wrong........" You said as you stand in front of the door with your back to America. "Come on England......." You say as you walk out the door. "......... Goodbye America..." England says then walks out the door.

You both get in the car. England drives you to a ramen shack to cheer you since he knows how much you love ramen. You both walk out and sit down. He buys himself a bowl and you a bowl. "England, you don't need to pay for me, I can pay for it." You say to him and smile that one smile that he adores. The chef finally brings out the ramen.

"_______" England says. "Yes?" You say. "Uh....... Nevermind......" He's says blushing lightly while looking quickly back at his ramen. You two finish your ramen and finally noticed the sun was setting. So you got back in England's car and he drives you home. He parks in your driveway. "Thank you for everything that happened today England, I had a nice time." You say as you unbuckle your seatbelt open the door. "Wait...." England says while grabbing your hand lightly. "Yes?" You say as you sit back down and close the door. England takes a deep breath and says:

"______, Your beautiful!! I think your smart, funny, and d*mn right cute. Who cares about what they think, focus on me. You're unique and I can't stop thing about you.... I love being around you. I love your scent. I get butterflies in my stomach at the sound of your voice. And that smile... That gorgeous smile... Just melts me away. And your wonderful kiss.... Makes me realize that we're meant to be together. I probably already said this but your BEAUTIFUL... You are perfect in every way... I'm probably the luckiest guy in the world... No... I am the luckiest guy in the world........... What I'm trying to say is........ I love you." The Brit finally finishes with a bright shade of red upon his face.

You stare at him for quite a while then you look down quickly. Your face bright as ever. You finally manage to look back up. Your face is a cute shade of red and your smiling very shyly. You kiss his cheek and say very quietly "I love you too...." He smiles at you, leans in and.......
Haha I trolled you. I'm only gonna finish that sentance in part 2. But theirs only gonna be a part two if you guys like it. Tell me what you think of it in the comments. Kay?

Link to part two: [link]
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Ima finish this sentence for mah self!

"He smiles at you, leans in, and....... *censored**censored*with a *censored**censored* in a *censored**censored* and then you got pregnant and died the end. :D
NekoHakuXx90 Mar 22, 2014  Student Digital Artist
a better love story than twilight, congratulations :iconepicclapplz:
MikuXHatsuneXSakura Jul 15, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Beautifully put... I never would of thought that myself -tear rolls down eye-
That1AsianChick Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
just curious, who in the world was America cheating on me with??
MikuXHatsuneXSakura Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Good question.......
That1AsianChick Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
MikuXHatsuneXSakura Jan 15, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
That1AsianChick Jan 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
when i got to the last sentence i was like "yes, yes, YES!... aww man" lol
MikuXHatsuneXSakura Dec 30, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Lol, yep. I'm a troll but lucky you I finished that sentence in part 2. :D
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